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Really liked it. Can't wait to read further adventures of Fien and her Infernal. Always leave the reader wanting more. I look forward to more!

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Uhhh, new pet? This doesn't seem like your typical cute little kitten or playful little puppy, Kiki? Nevertheless, I too can't wait to learn more about this Infernal and it's night time activities. Something sinister at play?

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It certainly is much different that a puppy or kitten but cute in its own way.

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Cute? You must be teasing...

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This was wonderful. Good old fashioned story telling in a unique fantasy setting. (Complete with a “familiar” sidekick.) I love that your page is named after a TSR D&D spell! 😀

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Thanks for the kind words Daniel. It was a fun one to write. We’ll see if our duo has any other adventures. Feel free to share it.

Thanks for noticing my nod to the OG spell.

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Great story Dan, only problem is I want more…what is going to happen next and what will Fien name her new pet?

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I’m glad you liked it. Seems calling it a pet would presume she could control or train it. But can she?

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I came over from Stardust Press. Great little story! What should I read next?

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Thanks for stopping by! The Tinker is one of my favs too. Folks also seemed to have liked Raising Rocabarra or if you’re looking for something longer you can dive into Arc One of The World Stone. Enjoy and welcome!

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Great story telling, imagery, suspense and surprise elements. Bravo!

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Thanks! It’s been fun writing and I’m super happy to start sharing with others.

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Left me so curious and wanting more! Please continue on with this story!

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Thanks Caitlyn. I'm quite certain Fien and her little infernal are about to get mixed up in something. Stay tuned.

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Pretty cool story

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Be careful with whom you tinker! Nice yarn, with just enough dangling thread to pull and see what else unravels...

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Love it, can’t wait to see more!! My cat Flippy brings us dead bunnies and mice all the time.

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