Uhhh, new pet? This doesn't seem like your typical cute little kitten or playful little puppy, Kiki? Nevertheless, I too can't wait to learn more about this Infernal and it's night time activities. Something sinister at play?
This was wonderful. Good old fashioned story telling in a unique fantasy setting. (Complete with a “familiar” sidekick.) I love that your page is named after a TSR D&D spell! 😀
Really liked it. Can't wait to read further adventures of Fien and her Infernal. Always leave the reader wanting more. I look forward to more!
Uhhh, new pet? This doesn't seem like your typical cute little kitten or playful little puppy, Kiki? Nevertheless, I too can't wait to learn more about this Infernal and it's night time activities. Something sinister at play?
Great story Dan, only problem is I want more…what is going to happen next and what will Fien name her new pet?
Great story telling, imagery, suspense and surprise elements. Bravo!
Left me so curious and wanting more! Please continue on with this story!
This was wonderful. Good old fashioned story telling in a unique fantasy setting. (Complete with a “familiar” sidekick.) I love that your page is named after a TSR D&D spell! 😀
Pretty cool story
Be careful with whom you tinker! Nice yarn, with just enough dangling thread to pull and see what else unravels...
Love it, can’t wait to see more!! My cat Flippy brings us dead bunnies and mice all the time.