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Carolyn McBride 🏳️‍🌈🇨🇦's avatar

Uh oh!

A terrific intro. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Dan Blakely's avatar

Thanks! Excited to share with you what happens next.

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Alexx Hart's avatar

Oh maaaan! Following the Aug fiction blast crumbs is proving to be problematic. Because now I need to know what happens and there’s only one of me! 🤣🤓🤣

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Dan Blakely's avatar

I have the same problem! Too much to read, not enough time. 😳

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Alexx Hart's avatar

This is why I require clones. Alas… 🤣

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Redd Oscar's avatar

Brilliant. Inticing worldbuilding and instantly likable character. Well paced for a man daydreaming while cooking. 🙂

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Dan Blakely's avatar

Thanks! He's really got some issues brewing. I'm gonna get back to reading your new story too - just been slammed with getting this going and then the crazy California weather lately! Thanks again for reading.

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Daniel W. Davison's avatar

Very nice intro, Dan!

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Dan Blakely's avatar

Thanks! We’ll see who rang that bell next week.

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