A Slip of the Tongue

[Carolyn McBride 🏳️‍🌈🇨🇦]

Uh oh!

A terrific intro. Can't wait to see what happens next!

[Dan Blakely]

Thanks! Excited to share with you what happens next.

[Redd Oscar]

Brilliant. Inticing worldbuilding and instantly likable character. Well paced for a man daydreaming while cooking. 🙂

[Dan Blakely]

Thanks! He's really got some issues brewing. I'm gonna get back to reading your new story too - just been slammed with getting this going and then the crazy California weather lately! Thanks again for reading.

[Daniel W. Davison]

Very nice intro, Dan!

[Dan Blakely]

Thanks! We’ll see who rang that bell next week.